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Smile by OsakaOji Smile by OsakaOji
something cute to break through my Art Block
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Critique by Abstract-Spectrum Mar 17, 2012, 7:17:22 PM
This is certainly a clean work of art. The form, color, and organization of the effects and layers of it get the point across that because she's named after toothpaste, her teeth are always the brightest white, and I can tell that from the sparkle on her teeth. I gotta love the shading, too. It's dramatic, yet not so dramatic that it makes it look like a sad and forgotten memory, but it's a great lighting shade that highlights the main character in a way that says "Look at me, and how awesome I am." The lines are clear and smooth, and make the character pop out as the spotlight above shines down upon her. It's almost like everypony in Ponyville came to a theater just to see her flash her pearly whites. You did an amazing job, and you definitely deserve the highest rating. However, there is always room for improvement. The only things I can really focus on that could make this any better would be to make her hair a little less shiny, and the spotlight should slightly overlap her to better enforce a sort-of "cone" lighting effect that most other artwork that uses a spotlight to highlight a character does.
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Ganemi Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaah, wie süß!
Das ist so ein absolutes Zahnweiß-Lächeln, wie es nur Colgate kann, hm? Saubere Linien und Colo, besonders gefällt mir, wie ihre Augen schimmern!
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Atibcken Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Guess who just brightened my day (she never fails)
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
yup same to me ^^ yeah Colgate wohoo ^^
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Inarjollyhound Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
Awsome!
"New teeth thats wierd" (the 10th doctor after his 9th regeneration)
Yes it is that level of Awsome! :iconepicwinplz: THANK YOU =D
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
No. thank you for the comment :D
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DeJiKo07 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
Colgate is da best!!!
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
i agree :D
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Skymaster1121 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
So cute Oji! ^.^
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:iconosakaoji:
OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
so thank you ^u^
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marikaefer Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Grats zum Drawfriend <3
Wirklich ein sehr gelungenes Bild, shiny!
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
Danke danke danke ^^
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LoganStoppable Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
One of your BEST art so far! Astoundingly polished and those colors - and that cuteness can give me heartattack :D
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
Thanks much funny fact its also one of my faster pictures i´ve done it in one(long) evening and night xD
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LoganStoppable Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
Don´t pull my leg mate xD But it really paid off!
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:iconbanjo2e:
banjo2E Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
~My shiny teeth that twinkle
Just like the stars in space~
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:iconosakaoji:
OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
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:iconbanjo2e:
banjo2E Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
If I was responsible for that, then I feel good about myself today.
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:iconlazyfiz:
LazyFiz Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My shiny teeth that sparkle
addin' beauty to my face


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:iconbanjo2e:
banjo2E Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
~My shiny teeth that glisten
Just like a Christmas tree~
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:iconlazyfiz:
LazyFiz Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You know they walk a mile just to see me smile
Woo!
My Shiny Teeth and Me
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BB-K Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ooo, her shiny white teeth! :D
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:iconosakaoji:
OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
"Don´t forget the Toothbrush" ^^
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BB-K Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconmlpcolgateplz: : "Brush at least twice per day!" ;)
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BetaPony Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is adorable! I love it! :D
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
thank you ^^
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Dibullba Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
Ok Colgate, show me them pearly whiYIYI OH GOD!!!! :iconmy-eyesplz:
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
whoopsie *sneakes away*
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cali-cat Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing shading *U*
Lovely picture!
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
thank you very much ^^ i´m allways glad to hear when people like my stuff ^^
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cali-cat Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem :)
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the-derp-man24 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
dat smile.
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:iconosakaoji:
OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
:icongrinchplz:*smile* xD
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GespenstKAF Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
If she and Might Gai smile within close proximity of each other, all things within a 50 mile radius will become blind.
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
xD good one xD
I guess you´re right :D
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Kiyoshiii Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwwwww so cute <3 Do you think I can hire her for any tooth cleaning activities? xD
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
i guess you have to ask Mole....Celestia for that xD
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:iconkiyoshiii:
Kiyoshiii Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What are you thinking of me?! T^T xD
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
nothing :iconliarjackplz:
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:iconn1de:
n1de Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SO FFFFF
SO ADORABLE.
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
SO FFFFFFFFFF THANK YOU xD
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CawinEMD Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
She have a beautiful Smile >w<
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:iconosakaoji:
OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
but don´t look directly to it or you may become blind xD
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:iconcawinemd:
CawinEMD Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't care x3
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Fetch26291 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
Minuette Colgate (the MLP:FiM wiki calls her Minuette, but all the fan stuff says Colgate)

Sadly, unless Hasbro can make a deal with the company that makes the toothpaste, her official name can't be Colgate :(
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
i stay with Colgate cause its the most memorable one ^^
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Tempestwulf Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Smile smile smile
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
=D
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ScottWolf Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
That Colgate (TM) Smile!
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
only possible with Colgate(TM)xD
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PuffyDearlySmith Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Now that's what I call a shinning white smile=D
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