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Smile by OsakaOji Smile by OsakaOji
something cute to break through my Art Block
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This is certainly a clean work of art. The form, color, and organization of the effects and layers of it get the point across that because she's named after toothpaste, her teeth are always the brightest white, and I can tell that from the sparkle on her teeth. I gotta love the shading, too. It's dramatic, yet not so dramatic that it makes it look like a sad and forgotten memory, but it's a great lighting shade that highlights the main character in a way that says "Look at me, and how awesome I am." The lines are clear and smooth, and make the character pop out as the spotlight above shines down upon her. It's almost like everypony in Ponyville came to a theater just to see her flash her pearly whites. You did an amazing job, and you definitely deserve the highest rating. However, there is always room for improvement. The only things I can really focus on that could make this any better would be to make her hair a little less shiny, and the spotlight should slightly overlap her to better enforce a sort-of "cone" lighting effect that most other artwork that uses a spotlight to highlight a character does.
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Ganemi Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaah, wie süß!
Das ist so ein absolutes Zahnweiß-Lächeln, wie es nur Colgate kann, hm? Saubere Linien und Colo, besonders gefällt mir, wie ihre Augen schimmern!
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Atibcken Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Guess who just brightened my day (she never fails)
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
yup same to me ^^ yeah Colgate wohoo ^^
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Inarjollyhound Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
Awsome!
"New teeth thats wierd" (the 10th doctor after his 9th regeneration)
Yes it is that level of Awsome! :iconepicwinplz: THANK YOU =D
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
No. thank you for the comment :D
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DeJiKo07 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
Colgate is da best!!!
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
i agree :D
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Skymaster1121 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
So cute Oji! ^.^
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OsakaOji Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
so thank you ^u^
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marikaefer Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Grats zum Drawfriend <3
Wirklich ein sehr gelungenes Bild, shiny!
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